Playback what you said:
You know it’s my wife’s.
And yet…
Apparently it’s my wife’s.
Though we don’t…
I have a wife!
Im not sure if i should have a space between the first line and the second line. It seems as if there is more to this poem but I haven't found the rest of it yet so...
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What kind of conversations are you and your friends having? jk. I like it how it is without the space just because it fits really compactly as a unified piece well. At least in my eyes it does. The choice to use the exclamation at the end worked well to me as well.
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